Sunday, January 24, 2010

By Public Demand...

tis a tale
born in lab gone stale,
a pleasant mix
a group of six...

let us begin
with whom no one's akin
the CRO,
character white as snow.
Always a 'song' in his mind
kindness and innocence combined...

then comes a fella
with control stellar
the uncanny style is
a hit with liz
and a cheek that he cant hide
righteousness personified

next in line
dances as on cloud nine,
frankness and a smile
he'el go with you the extra mile
and had he not told
tis tale would not unfold

then comes poor Imsong
who just got dragged along
and didnt have a clue
of what he helped us brew

later is a silence
tall as a fence.
folks say family
he just smiles coyly
and were it not for coffee
tis tale no one could tell yee...

last but not at all the least
comes a garlic naan feast
he only said jha
and laughed haha..
rebellious to the core
but never will he bore...

And now that the tales told
its for yee to unfold.....
for only the moon bluest
could collect all of the ******

(Dedicated to Randy, Andy,Paul,Ian,Sam and Tom only ! )

15 comments:

  1. this one is the BEST!!!!
    I love u Shanta!!!seriously mann....
    it looks so poetic and also u presented the characters so beautifully in those 4 lines...
    Simply awesome!!!!
    Gr88!!!!!!
    I have no words dude!!!

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  2. Truly a masterpiece. Excellent vivid descriptions. Humorous throughout and very good last couple of lines.
    I m sure the RAPISTS will unite before the bluest moon.

    NB: Note sure about the "I" though.

    :)

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  3. ohh...definitely Ankit!! No doubt abou that!! We were always united and long distance has surely made the RAPIST even more stronger!!
    Kudos to our grp..thou Imsong might be wondering.."Wat wrong did I do?"
    lol..

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  4. Awesome shanta
    really good
    But u dint buy the IPR for the rapist group and CRO from me atleast ek cookie toh banta hai dost

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  5. oye shanta...too good yaar
    seriously didnt know der was a wordsworth in u....
    simply mind blowing
    loved the way u have described evry1 in such a mysterious way but yet it describes evrything...hats off 2u dude!!!

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  6. arrre shanta......tu khapla aahes ka????...really man...i want to kno tat....where was this poet all these days.....arre wat excellent rhyme, wat excellent use of archaic, and tat too within hours?!?!....infinite salutes to you....CRO khush hua!!!!

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  7. arre wahh shanta !!! bhari hai ... fullon shanta style !! waise yeh RAPIST gang ke poem ke liye tune bhi bana le ... nxt tym wen u guys come for vacs pura performance de dena :)

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  8. awesome one Shanta sorry for reading n replying late...everybody is been described correctly n in beautiful words.tc

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  9. Awesome shantanu!!!
    best description...for each one..
    so know i completely agree.. dat "variety is the spice of life"
    hehe... (atleast for the RAPIST gang)

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  10. thanks a lot people..... :)....
    there are a couple of observations that i have now in retrospect.....

    1. this post might have been too much "in your face".... that people are recognizing the puns so easily ;). I hope that i dont get on the wrong side of some people .... :)

    2. also people like it when they talk or read about themselves or people they know..... :)....hmmmm....theres definitely some thing in there.....

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